Jeffery,
J. V. (2011). Subjectivity, intentionality, and manufactured moves: Teachers’
perceptions of voice in the evaluation of secondary students’ writing. Research in the Teaching of English, 46(1),
92-127.
Author: Jill
V. Jeffery is an Assistant Professor in the Department of Language, Literacy, and
Sociocultural Studies and the Department of English at the University of New
Mexico. According to academia.edu, her “scholarship focus on constructs of
writing competence as perceived by students, teachers, and writing assessment
designers.” I need to pay special attention to what she is producing because
she is interested in understanding transition experiences from “secondary to
postsecondary writing demands”. She studied English Education (post-bacc) here
at the University of Texas and earned her PhD in English Education from New
York University.
Date: Like
Vieira, very recent publication in 2011. She is two years out of her doctoral
study. An early impression on the academic scene.
Research Questions:
From page 92:
1)
What language features
do secondary English teachers associate with voice in secondary students’
writing?
2)
How do they explain
their associations?
3)
Ho do such identified features
vary across genres as well as among readers?
Context (need for
study): Continued questioning of “voice” as a
writing standard – inequity when applying same standard to ELLs in high-stakes
writing assessment. “Researchers have used sociocultural and functionalist
frameworks to analyze voice-related discursive patterns, yet we do not know how
readers evaluate written texts for voice” (p. 92). Leaning on the 60s comp theorists
Peter Elbow, Don Murray, and Stewart? voice
had a big presence, but 80s and 90s saw the emphasis had gone too far –
undermining goal for academic writing. Late 90s and early 2000s brought up the
fairness to ELLs. Despite the academy’s discreditation of voice, still remains in classrooms.
Methods:
Think-aloud interviews (talk about voice as they read the papers with follow-up
questions) with 20 teachers (at least three years, master’s degree, and
National Writing Project, from West, Northeast, and Midwest – 1 is discarded
over poor recording quality) over samples of secondary narrative and expository
writing (high scoring from OR exit-level test 2007). Inductive analysis? of interview
transcripts. Look through developmental and sociocultural lenses – “how
developmental approaches to voice might be integrated within sociocultural models”
(p. 93). Systemic functional linguistics? Narrative and expository should have
certain characteristics with associated with development.
Findings:
The teachers involved showed a bent in
recognizing voice toward “appraisal
features, such as amplified expressions of affect and judgment” (p. 92). What
does this mean? All 19 used the “evaluative code” of “tone” to mark voice, 16
used “explicit stance”. Most also talked about structure patterns of diction,
specificity, sentence structure, coherence, and development. Talk on language
features included connecting voice to effectiveness of intentionality (choice, control,
command)). There is a feeling of sensing commitment and passionate with
positive associations and academic or perfunctory with negative views on voice.
There is an imagination of an author. They don’t know the student who wrote the
piece, but they are connecting to developing writers. Associations of
youthfulness and personality were positive in narrative and maturity in
expository. 9 of 12 teachers who associated gender to the author, thought
female because of the age and perceived maturity level of insight.
Discussion (my
connection): A paradox in teaching voice – voice seems
to be so individual that it conflicts with structures that can be taught or
measure up to academic writing. Can voice be “manufactured” through following
specific traits? I have the feeling that although everyone used tone (an
evaluative code) the more used indicators of voice were structural patters – I see
those more as tricks to make the reader perceive a powerful voice. In high
school, my AP English teacher gave everyone awards – I received the “confidence”
award. Looking back, I think I figured out that you could play the AP game –
that certain structures could elicit the feelings of “rightness” or something
to that effect. But half of the teachers talked as if they could spot natural
vs forced effectiveness.
Purcell-Gates,
V., Duke, N. K., & Martineau, J. A. (2007). Learning to read and write
genre-specific text: Roles of authentic experience and explicit teaching. Reading Research Quarterly, 42(1), 8-45.
Authors: Victoria
Purcell-Gates received her Ph.D from UC Berkely in 1986. She was awarded Most
Promising Researcher from NCTE in 1987 and has seemed to live up to that –
hitting some high-point awards and appointments in the early 2000s. She is on
faculty at the University of British Columbia: victoria.purcell-gates@ubc.ca. Interested in
purposes for and attitudes toward reading and writing and designing educational
experiences for young children that build on knowledge gained in home communities.
Cognitive learning and sociolinguistics are focuses. She is currently working with family literacy and doing study in Guatemala.
Nell
K Duke was on faculty at Michigan State University in Teacher Education and
Counseling, Educational Psychology and Special Education. She just started at
the University of Michigan this fall: nkduke@umich.edu. Ed.D from
Harvard. According to her page at umich.edu: expertise in “development of
informational reading and writing in young children, comprehensions development
and instruction in early schooling, and issues of equity in literacy education.” She highlights a lack of nonfiction texts (written outside of narrative?) in primary grades.
Joseph
A. Martineau is a member of the state of Michigan’s Department of Education in
the office of Educational Assessment and Accountability/Bureau of Assessment
and Accountability. MSU in 2004? I am interested in his 2010 publication in Phi Delta Kappan about value-added
models in accountability for teacher effectiveness and how parents see the
situation.
Date: 2007
is near the end of President G.W. Bush’s second term – perhaps some NCLB
backlash? Recent work in genre studies.
Research Questions:
1) What
is the impact of explicit teaching of genre features of informational and
procedural text in science on children’s ability to read and write these texts?
Does this impact differ from children from homes of different parental education
levels?
2) Is
the degree of authenticity of literacy activities, or the degree of explicit
teaching of language features, with these texts related to children’s growth in
the ability to read and write them? Does this impact differ from children from
homes of different parental education levels?
Context (need for
study): From page 8: “This study addresses the
long-held debate regarding how language is best learned, particularly language
forms that are not acquired as one’s primary discourse (Gee, 1992), such as
reading and writing.” Spectrum: language acquired only through situated
experiences to explicit instruction. Question has been addressed in decoding
individual words, indicating explicit teaching is best. Grades 2 and 3 are at “a
developmental level rarely included in studies of genre learning of content
area written discourse” (p. 11). Critical mass agreement on necessity of
authentic literacy activities in genre learning, but little research, “nor is
there even a well-established meaning of this variable” (p. 13). What
combination of experience and explicit instruction best facilitates learning of
new language forms? Exploring “the roles of (a) authentic, communicatively
functional reading and writing and (b) the explicit explanation of genre function
and features on growth in genre-specific reading and writing abilities of
children in grades two and three” (p. 9).
Methods:
Within constructivist perspective, view of language as essentially social. Experimental
and correlational designs? Longitudinal (at classroom level) for a year,
possibly two. 420 students (student level is quasi-experiemental) from 16 2nd
grade classes, 10 were followed to 3rd grade, growth measured 6
timeusing Hierarchical Linear Modeling. 2 groups – authentic reading and
writing with science texts (informational and procedural genres) OR authentic
experiences WITH explicit language feature explanations. Teachers attended
summer workshop, taught science 2 times a week for 45-60 min at a time. One or
more researchers in on a weekly basis to code implementation and coach
instruction. Each teacher bought a library of science books for purposes of
research – fitting criteria. Study not in change of curriculum, but of
increased use of authentic literacy activities and (for one group) “explicit
teaching of genre functions and features” (p. 17).
Findings:
“No effect of explicit teaching on reading and writing growth for six of seven
outcomes” (p. 9). Strong correlation of degree of authenticity with growth for
4/7. Addition of “growing empirical evidence regarding the efficacy of
involving students in reading and writing for real-life purposes in the
classroom” (p. 9). Parent education levels did not seem to be a factor – page 30:
1/7 outcomes in 2nd grade. Some schools supposed to be A+E fell into
A-only distributions – not every class had the same degree of explicitness.
Degree of authenticity of events shows faster rate of student growth. Findings do not indicate that the amount of
time is not the simple answer, looking directly at the nature of the
experience.
Discussion (my
connection): How is there a degree of authenticity?
Either it is authentic or it is not. Be on the look out – page 14 answers this…”This
term relates specifically to the nature of the reading and writing acts, or
events, in which students engage while participating in the activity of
schooling” (p. 14). The idea of teaching of language and genre features matches
with Jeffery’s article about teachers associating certain features with
positive assessments of voice. How does one’s interpretation of tone and skill
(and whether these are natural or forced) differ across the board? Does
teaching a formula or being explicit lead to students trying too hard to have a
good lead, for example? In regards to the note that it is not just the quantity
of time spent reading and writing – I think Wilt Chamberlain said something
against the idea of practice makes perfect. You can practice incorrectly all
the time. It will just make you good at doing the wrong thing. There are times
for intervention – perfect practice makes perfect. So, I see the value in regularly making authentic
events, but there are times for the explicit direction. The evidence doesn't find a correlation, though.
Vieira,
K. E. (2011). Undocumented in a documentary society: Textual borders and
transnational religious literacies. Written
Communication, 28, 436-461.
Author:
Kate Elizabeth Vieira writes on discourse study, immigration in education,
cultural difference, acculturation. She finished her dissertation, “an
ethnographic study of the writing of two Portuguese-speaking immigrant groups”
in Massachusetts, in 2010 at The University of Wisconsin - Madison. Currently
at University of Illinois, Urbana-Champaign; kvieira@illinois.edu.
Date:
Like Jeffery, very recent publication in 2011. She is two years out of her
doctoral study. An early impression on the academic scene.
Research Questions:
How has the transnational movement of a particular group of people, from Brazil
to Massachusetts, shaped their literacy lives?
Context (need for
study): Looking at migrants’ literacy
practices as shaped from crossing national boarders – subset of interest in
transnationalism within Writing Studies. Note the demographics of the 22
participants on page 438.
Methods:
Ethnographic study – undocumented Brazilian community in Massachusetts.
Ethnographic observations, study of writing samples (from whomever was willing
to supply – see page 439), and analysis of participants’ accounts of own
literacy practices on both sides of migration experiences. Heavy on literary history
interviews. Constructivist approach to grounded theory. Open coding of
interviews for all literacy practices.
Findings:
Crossing borders keeps certain literacy experiences out of reach, especially
for those who are undocumented in the new nation. Refuge or revitalization of
literacy practices within institutions not connected to the sate – specifically
churches. “Writing practices became increasingly religious in the United States
when compared with writing practices in Brazil” (p. 441) – political immigrant status
drove participants to religious literacy events. Trauma often led to increased
involvement at church – an exploitation of non-dominant/marginalized positions.
Workplace literacies remained similar, but a general increase in digital literacy
practices. Pro-immigrant readings of the Bible designate the difference between
what is man-made (governments and borders) and what is part of the inclusive
law of God (p. 453).
Discussion (my
connection): Church seems to be a safe place from
the government. I have a sense that there is a substantial hope in the
spiritual or honored tradition that the uncertainty of government cannot
provide. There is a sense of community and reality that the church can provide –
easier? to be open about yourself at church than with a government that doesn’t
seem to want you there – you have a PLACE at church. (p. 445). The increase in
digital space literacies is a way to be known – both in their new situations as
well as back at “home”. Teenagers in PBS Frontline’s “Growing Up Online” flock
to digital spaces in order to find community. Knowledge transfer is a big part
of this new identity in The United States; look at the transformation of
secular genre practices to religious genres in the US on page 448. I am intrigued
by Washington. His plan to return to Brazil after 5 years and refusal to have
an “artificial” US marriage shows me that his hope is in the return, the past?
So there is not a look to the divine for the future. On page 457: “If bureaucracies
have a historically documented need to count,
participants in this study had a corresponding need to be counted.” WOW! I do not think I have engaged this idea of
textual belonging yet – this is a must watch for me.
The Jeffery article uses methods that reveal more about teacher reading of student writing than student writing processes.
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